Daphnie's persuasive writing!:)

I disagree with fashion designer

I have to disagree with fashion designer. In my opinion I think that students, like me who do not like uniforms, are way more suited to wear colourful clothes they are more comfortable in.

Students who attend school are reasonable enough to wear sensible footwear, and clothing. Colours help express students moods or emotions which help students feel comfortable and relaxed about their surroundings. It can also trigger their neural reward systems which will make them feel positive about themselves and others.

I object! Grey and dark green are definitely not the best colours for school uniforms. Grey is a dull and gloomy colour that does not and should not suit for a uniform fit for students suit for students Furthermore some students complain and say they feel like a grey cloud. Dark green on tartan dresses was probably not the greatest decision the school made to have as a uniform. Students are also not terribly happy about the design or colour of their uniforms.

The pupils at Oxford Brooke’s University probably would change their minds if they saw Saint Theresa’s School uniforms, in my defense the uniforms do not look smart and that is a fact..

The uniforms are not easy to run or even walk in! Especially if you wear those filthy, ugly, heavy brick shoes. Also I don’t think black is a good idea for uniforms because black attracts the sun which will cause students to sweat or get extremely hot very quickly. How does fashion designer expect girls to run around in baggy, long tartan dresses that are not comfortable and fashionable at all? They also drag us down.

Therefore I conclude that students should not wear uniforms to school or at least change the uniforms to look more suitable and non-dull.

By Daphnie Sikipi

Olly's Persuasive Writing

A letter from an, Under Armour, Fan.

In my opinion children should wear suitable clothing to school like sports clothes, Under Armour tops, and shorts, not ugly uniforms. Also the children find it hard to work in and they are scratchy uncomfortable dull ugly and untidy. The uniforms are dull and look like the odd one out to the different schools. I think we look like a good school without horrible uniforms because we behave amazingly compared to the different schools.

Another reason I would like to make that if we have a school uniform our parents have to waste their special time washing our sturdy uniforms they are hard to wash and iron them.

If we wear tidy clothes it is easy to run in and less baggy when we play different sports because they are sports clothes that you use for sports.

Finally uniforms which are big and baggy children find it hard to run, work in, and hard for are Mum and Dad to wash them.

Therefore I believe children should be allowed to wear any clothes they like to school.  

By Olly Reynolds