Daphnie's persuasive writing!:)

I disagree with fashion designer

I have to disagree with fashion designer. In my opinion I think that students, like me who do not like uniforms, are way more suited to wear colourful clothes they are more comfortable in.

Students who attend school are reasonable enough to wear sensible footwear, and clothing. Colours help express students moods or emotions which help students feel comfortable and relaxed about their surroundings. It can also trigger their neural reward systems which will make them feel positive about themselves and others.

I object! Grey and dark green are definitely not the best colours for school uniforms. Grey is a dull and gloomy colour that does not and should not suit for a uniform fit for students suit for students Furthermore some students complain and say they feel like a grey cloud. Dark green on tartan dresses was probably not the greatest decision the school made to have as a uniform. Students are also not terribly happy about the design or colour of their uniforms.

The pupils at Oxford Brooke’s University probably would change their minds if they saw Saint Theresa’s School uniforms, in my defense the uniforms do not look smart and that is a fact..

The uniforms are not easy to run or even walk in! Especially if you wear those filthy, ugly, heavy brick shoes. Also I don’t think black is a good idea for uniforms because black attracts the sun which will cause students to sweat or get extremely hot very quickly. How does fashion designer expect girls to run around in baggy, long tartan dresses that are not comfortable and fashionable at all? They also drag us down.

Therefore I conclude that students should not wear uniforms to school or at least change the uniforms to look more suitable and non-dull.

By Daphnie Sikipi