Thursday, October 30, 2014

Behind the door


The floorboards groaned like a menacing beast. I stepped forwards. My heart raced. Sweat poured. My hands shook. I leaned forwards to open the door. Someone beat me to it. The door creaked open. My heart skipped beat. I saw dark eyes watching me from the corners. It was the cat. It was October the 31st. I was out trick or treating. I was in for a trick with a deadly end.

                                                    By Ella Dougherty

1 comment:

  1. Well done Ella. This is a magnificent suspense story with great use of writing tools to build up anticipation!

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