Dominic's suspense writing with Mrs Hogan.

I ran through the shadowy cemetery, I had chills down my spine.  Big yellow eyes glared at me from the dark corners.  I thought I was alone but I wasn't...

Behind the door

The floorboards groaned like a menacing beast. I stepped forwards. My heart raced. Sweat poured. My hands shook. I leaned forwards to open the door. Someone beat me to it. The door creaked open. My heart skipped beat. I saw dark eyes watching me from the corners. It was the cat. It was October the 31^st. I was out trick or treating. I was in for a trick with a deadly end.

                                                    By Ella Dougherty

The shadow in the night

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The sweaty grip on the sword tightened as a mournful wail, rose out of the dark forbidding forest... The noise came again but this time to the right.

The man had originally set out to hunt the beast, but now he knew... it was hunting him!

By Conal Mulligan   

Michael's persuasive writing

A letter from a styler.

Children look a lot better in casual clothes.

School children should wear whatever they like. For example converses, T-shirts, shorts/pants or gym shoes,shirts and pants. They will be easy to tell apart and feel unique. They will always know the latest fashion which will promote the fashion industry a lot more than when the children had school uniforms.

Another point I would like to make is white shows any dirt and grey turns an even darker grey or black (normal clothes don't). Children are not messy and if you take one look at our design teachers desk the fashion designer will rethink the statement about being messy. Obviously white and grey are the worst possible choice ever.

Also there are bright colors all around the children so they won't be distracted by the color of their clothes. I have noticed that the children like the idea of wearing any type of clothes. Studies have shown that if schools are controlling over school uniform the atmosphere becomes uncomfortable and hard to work in and the darker the more depressing.

Finally other clothes are a lot better because they are lose and easy to run around in where as with school uniform the colors are dark and depressing and the shoes are big, clunky things witch makes it hard to run around in.

Therefore I believe that children should wear whatever they like because the clothes won't show any stains, promote the fashion designer and they would not be distracted by colors. This letter should prove my point.

By Michael

Aidan persuasive writing

A letter from an Under armour fan.   

In my opinion children should be able to wear what we want to wear to school. Because we look better in bright clothing instead off uniforms that are hideous and not comfortable.
         
And secondly  you will never forget your gym shoes because there's  is a good chance you will be wearing them. And if you are hot you  get hotter in are big grey tops and are thick socks. So  we should wear comfortable like  shorts and an a hoodie or other clothes.

So in my opinion we should wear what  we want wear to school.

                                               







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Hunter's persuasive writing

A letter from a fashionable student

I disagree with the crazy designer that thinks kids should wear uniforms to school.


In my opinion I think kids should be able to wear mufti to school everyday instead of their  boring  uniform.My reasons are that school uniforms are not stylish.The
jerseys are big and woolly and they make you itch like mad and if they get wet they smell really horrible.The horrible dark shorts and grey shirts that are not fashionable and look disgusting.


Also you can save a big amount of money by not buying ugly dull horrible uniform and wearing the wonderful clothes you have already bought. Also it does not matter if your wonderful clothes are in the wash because you can just wear a different pair.But if your uniform is in the wash and you don't have another pair it can stress you out and make you late for school.


Also study's from answer.com say that school uniforms don't let kids express they personalities.


Therefore I think kids should be able to wear any clothes they please to school.


By Hunter Fahey

Dom's persuasive writing

A letter from a world class fashion designer.

In my opinion I think children should be allowed to wear what ever they want, the dull boring uniform we have now should be banned from all schools around the country.

School kids should wear mufti because our uniform has big clompers for shoes and has clothes that we get hot in they are very tight and no one likes them, they also are very uncomfortable.

I think colour is fun and no one likes wearing dull colours so we should not get another uniform we should just wear mufti.

Finally if we wear mufti we can run around easier because we can wear NRL shorts and all those sports shorts on hot days and fat pants on cold days then the field doesn't need to get closed because we can wear different clothes the next day, plus we can  wear Marist and touch hoodies, we will look swagalicious (look good in the clothes).

Colour makes kids happy therefore I think kids should be allowed to wear mufti like fat pants,NRL shorts, and Marist hoodies.

             BY DOMINIC RICHARDSON