Sunday, September 7, 2014

Michael's persuasive writing


A letter from a styler.

Children look a lot better in casual clothes.

School children should wear whatever they like. For example converses, T-shirts, shorts/pants or gym shoes,shirts and pants. They will be easy to tell apart and feel unique. They will always know the latest fashion which will promote the fashion industry a lot more than when the children had school uniforms.

Another point I would like to make is white shows any dirt and grey turns an even darker grey or black (normal clothes don't). Children are not messy and if you take one look at our design teachers desk the fashion designer will rethink the statement about being messy. Obviously white and grey are the worst possible choice ever.

Also there are bright colors all around the children so they won't be distracted by the color of their clothes. I have noticed that the children like the idea of wearing any type of clothes. Studies have shown that if schools are controlling over school uniform the atmosphere becomes uncomfortable and hard to work in and the darker the more depressing.

Finally other clothes are a lot better because they are lose and easy to run around in where as with school uniform the colors are dark and depressing and the shoes are big, clunky things witch makes it hard to run around in.

Therefore I believe that children should wear whatever they like because the clothes won't show any stains, promote the fashion designer and they would not be distracted by colors. This letter should prove my point.

By Michael

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