Monday, September 1, 2014

Zach Persuasive Writing

A letter from a real fashion designer

Children look much better in bright clothes than dark grey shirts and shorts called school uniforms.

In my opinion children should be allowed to wear what ever they want to school.

School children should be able to wear anything they want to school for example track suit pants, rugby jerseys, onesies and so on. I think children look stylish in colourful sweatshirts than green jerseys and black vests.

Another point so that on grey you can see dirt stains easily but if you can wear mufti you might be wearing brown so you couldn't see the stain as much. Adding to that food stains like strawberries which are red would show up on a dark grey shirt but if you could wear mufti you may be wearing red so you couldn't see it as much.

Also mufti is way more comfortable than baggy grey ugly shirts and shorts. For example we wouldn't have to get changed in or out of sports gear because mufti would be our sports gear.

Therefore I believe school aged children should be allowed to wear what ever they please.

By Zach

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