Sunday, September 7, 2014

Dom's persuasive writing

A letter from a world class fashion designer.

In my opinion I think children should be allowed to wear what ever they want, the dull boring uniform we have now should be banned from all schools around the country.

School kids should wear mufti because our uniform has big clompers for shoes and has clothes that we get hot in they are very tight and no one likes them, they also are very uncomfortable.

I think colour is fun and no one likes wearing dull colours so we should not get another uniform we should just wear mufti.

Finally if we wear mufti we can run around easier because we can wear NRL shorts and all those sports shorts on hot days and fat pants on cold days then the field doesn't need to get closed because we can wear different clothes the next day, plus we can  wear Marist and touch hoodies, we will look swagalicious (look good in the clothes).

Colour makes kids happy therefore I think kids should be allowed to wear mufti like fat pants,NRL shorts, and Marist hoodies.

             BY DOMINIC RICHARDSON

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